Flowers10's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doppelganger]

sweet edges! :) Any tips on how to achieve that?

zephyo responds:

Just use a small brush and go around the hard edges, use smudge for soft ones

[AilieTheWolf]

Allright since you asked for critique, here it goes.

The composition could have been better if you'd cut of like 1/4 off the top. You could make the text a bit smaller so it would still fit.
I wouldnt use any full blacks for shading as technically only places where light cant reach it would be 100% black, and there is also the atmosphere in the air that bounces light to a lot of places.
The keyboard looks really crappy, like its a picture that's transformed to make it fit the perspective.
The painting and the character with the text "i love school" both dont have shading.
The light of the monitor seems to shine on the table only? doesn't hit the keyboard or the character. Your character only receives light from above, whilst it the light source of the fire is from behind. So it should receive bounce light from the floor instead.
The horns of the character aren't put on symmetrical. six pack is an eight pack? and wtf is going on with the hands and arms?

Hope this helps, if you want any more critique mssg me :)

Oh-Sama responds:

Thanks for your help. I tried my best but the whole picture has lots of light sources so I couldn't get my shading right. Everything you said is true, I'll keep that in mind for my next work. Also This piece was only supposed to serve as a joke :)

[Cave Troll]

This might be your best work yet!
The forms are well described and it all looks very clean.

The anatomy doesnt make any sense tho.
And lighting is inconsistent.

[Cover Me]

Love it, just needs bigger boobs!

[Kickass]

Your drapery is quite shitty. You should really observe how cloths fold around the a body in motion, because this is not how it works.
Also all your highlight are white. light doesnt work that way, it blends with the service it hits.

good job on foreshortening though!
Sorry if im kinda rough on you i'm kinda tipsy :P

[Rose]

Proportions are total shit.
Has a nice overall look to it though!
Also: GIEF NIPLES!

[Space and falling stars]

The proportions for this are awfull!
Everything els is quite awesome!

P-cate responds:

LOL OK??

[Character study compilation]

Pretty good, but watch your proportions they are all over the place. also dont light with black and white, thats what all beginners do.

Alissandra responds:

Thank you very much for the advice! Do you mean that for the time being I should abandon using black and white alltogether? I have naever been to any decent art lesson but I know that at any art faculty professors forbid their students to use black paint. I can see also my colors are... I don't know, they seem pretty naive to me. Some fantasy paintings have trully realistic coloring you can automatically see the depth in them. Do you think that it will be hard to achieve because of my lack of formal schooling or is it something that will come to me in the end? Thanks once again!

[Vency]

Great values, how did you learn that?

[Imaginative Character]

Your studies dont show through your imaginative work.. If all you do is copy you wont learn much and eventually will become a copy machine. Do more work from imagination and try to improve in whatever you suck at and study it.